Hi! Rebecca M. Douglass here, author of “The Tide Waits” in
the Tick Tock anthology, here to share a bit about how and why I wrote my
story.
In some ways, the answer is easy: I write cozy mysteries,
among other things, so the IWSG anthology this year was a natural fit. I was
sure I could do something good with the mystery prompt. Then I saw the part
about the theme being clocks or time, and I wasn’t so sure. After all, clocks
in murder mysteries were done to death so long ago they never even appear
anymore, right? (I’d say from the stories in the anthology that there
were still plenty of interesting mysteries to write about time!).
So the theme worried me a bit, and I knew I wanted to take a
little different approach—to the mystery
or to the clock, or (as it turned out), to both. Since my PTA murder mysteries are set on Pismawallops Island, a pile of glacial leavings in the middle of Puget Sound, and because I grew up on a similar pile, my first thoughts ran to ferries and ferry schedules. That just wouldn’t gel in my mind, until I thought of the tides—the most important time-keeper for sea folk. That was when I remembered Lira.
or to the clock, or (as it turned out), to both. Since my PTA murder mysteries are set on Pismawallops Island, a pile of glacial leavings in the middle of Puget Sound, and because I grew up on a similar pile, my first thoughts ran to ferries and ferry schedules. That just wouldn’t gel in my mind, until I thought of the tides—the most important time-keeper for sea folk. That was when I remembered Lira.
Lira made her first appearance in a bit of flash fiction
several years ago, tending bar in a village in an unspecified but not modern
time and place. I liked that she is a woman in an unconventional job, and that
she's competent and in control. I knew from that first story that Lira is the
go-to problem solver for her village, making it natural that an old fisherman
would turn to her when he finds a dead man.
Lira’s story was fun to write, as well as exasperating. The
tide, which I have always taken for granted and would have said I understood
well, proved more complex than expected, not to mention unwilling to cooperate
with my narrative needs. It took a lot of edits to get it right (I hope), and
many thanks to Jemima Pett, who helped me find the errors.
Take a quick look at Lira in action:
“Shut it, you sotted fool!”
“It’s th’ lord’s truth.”
The thump of a blow cut off the too-loud declaration,
and Lira looked up from the glass she had just filled. In the back corner of
the bar, two shepherds lambasted one another drunkenly. Sighing, she handed the
glass across to the blacksmith, and picked up the stout club she kept to
maintain the peace. Crossing the room in three strides, Lira grabbed the loudmouth
by the collar, and barred the second man from further attack with her weapon.
Lira dragged the dazed shepherd to the door, pushed
him out into the night, and turned to confront his drinking buddy and sparring
partner. “You, too. Out.”
The second shepherd cast a forlorn look at the
table where half a glass of ale still stood. “Aw, I was just—” He took another
look at the bartender’s face, shut up, and went out into the night.
You’ll have to get your copy of Tick Tock, A Stitch In Crime to find out how Lira handles her other job! You can pre-order and copies will be available May 1. Add it to your TBR list on Goodreads! Join us on Facebook.
That tide had to go in and out at just the right time, and you did it!
ReplyDeleteControlling the tides is an awesome power :D
DeleteThe story was very atmospheric.
ReplyDeleteA great angle on the prompt.
Thanks!
DeleteI really liked Lira. She didn't put up with any crap.
ReplyDeleteYeah, I like that about her, too!
DeleteYour excerpt is awesome--can't wait to read more! Thanks for sharing!
ReplyDeleteThanks! It's a great collection of stories :)
DeleteInteresting excerpt. Sounds like a great story!
ReplyDeleteLove it! Lira sounds like a fabulous character!!!
ReplyDeleteIt's sounds awesome! I love a strong female character. Can't wait to read it.
ReplyDeleteLira, had no fear. Great story. Well told!
ReplyDeleteMy beach walks depend on the tide. Great character for your story.
I love the word, "sotted." It's perfect here. Great to meet your character, Rebecca!
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